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Cons: I think the pic could of used some bushes, like, evil faces like the one in the corner, and I think you could've made the dragon like, a little more transparent.
Pros: The shading, the glowing, the wings, the moon, the sky, the forground, the trees.
This picture is absoloutely wonderful and splendid, You have inspired me sooo much, I love this picture.
You know what, because of this, I am gonna wish for Photoshop on christmas, I love how this inspires me, I will make a ghost dragon OC now, too.
Pros: 7
Cons:2
Pros are good,
Cons are bad. I think.
Cons: The most bothering thing about this picture to me is the wings. If this dragon were to take off, only the frontal half of her body would be supported and she'd pretty much fly in circles. To solve this the wing membrane should join to her body much lower down on her body near her hips.
Also her wings should be at least a 1:1.5 ratio to her body, meaning that they should be almost twice her size to support her weight, but then again you did say that this the ghost of a dragon.
While I'm on the ghost subject, for effect it would be interesting if you would make the edges of her body semi-transparent, like the edges of her wings and the end of her tail.
There's also something about where her head attaches to her neck that bothers me but I can't quite nail what it is.
Also the water should be more flat and reflective.
Pros: I love, love the aspect in the background. The foreground addition and how you used colors to accent her design and not make it look out of place.
I really like the addition of the jack-o-lantern like face. <3
Also I like how you didn't make the moon look like a cookie.
|D
And the way you kept a specific lightsource is also fantastic.
The thin lineart is a plus.
And the wrinkles in the cloth around her neck look well definitive.
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So in all:
5 cons/8 pros
Good job.
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